PAINT BALLING
this is a story of what i did on my holidays it is a story about paintballing
we arrived at paintball porirua at 1:25 am.
20 minutes later we are on the field . pheeeeeeep the round has started and i climb down from the tower i now know the basic set out of course . i pop my head out of the covered area . a paint ball flies towards me i duck into cover again and yell ‘INCOMING!!!”. the paintball strikes my teammate.
the right flank was the most important flank there was a hallway that led to an area five meters from the other base . me and three others storm the hallway but came under heavy fire . we are forced to fall back but we have a serious problem the nearest cover is a 4 second sprint away . a paint ball can cover the hole playing field in a second so we just run,run,run.
from then on i stayed in the tower this is when the fighting is the most ferocious and serving as a sniper it was always shoot ,down, up ,shoot again and again . i got the main threat to our team was houto with 250 rounds to our one hundred and fifty rounds and a automatic.
i served as a sniper for the rest of the battle with a steamed up mask i directed fire and gave some my self . then i was out of paint.
this is just a parts of a forty five minuet battle look out for paint balling two
ReplyDeleteDuncan, i? did you do your proof reading before you posted this? If so..... how come you haven't included your basic punctuation such as capitals and full stops. You will find comments about your lack of punctuation will be like paint balls flying in your direction and getting a direct hit each time. I find reading it without the punctuation is difficult and distracts me from your content. You could go in and edit your work so it is correct. Or you might correct it off-line in a Google doc and then re-post it, leaving the original there, so people can see how much correcting you have done. - Mr Corlett
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