Thursday, 7 November 2013


Author: Teneka T
Characters:
-Jill
-Mother
-Father
-Jack




Mother: One more thing, me and Father are now the only ones that will get water from the well, is that clear?

Jack: Yes Mum.

Mother: What about you Jill?

Jill: Sure Mother.

Father: Jill can you get some more water?

Mother: She’s NOT allowed Father.

Jill: Please Mum.

Mother: well ok just this time.

( Jill goes out of Jack's room and gets the pail and then walks out the door)

Jill: Bye.

Mother,Father and Jack: Bye! ( From Jack’s room)

( Jill goes up the hill careful and puts the pail into the well and then takes it out)

Jill: Phew! This is hard work. ( As she walks down the hill forgetting to be careful!)

Jill: Opps! I nearly slipped! ( As she starts to slip)

Jill: Oh no I am going to slip! argh! ( She starts to slip more and then she tumbles to the ground)

Jill: Ouch! ( As father runs up the hill and comes up to Jill)

JIll: Help! Please.

Father: Jill I thought you would be careful!

Jill: Sorry Dad I forgot.

Father: Well I guess its alright.

Jill: Thanks.

Father: Well I think you broke your crown to look its bleeding.

Jill: No wonder my head hurts. ( As she sits up and feels her head)

Father: Its not as bad as Jack though.

Jill: Ture we should go home on. ( As she gets up and goes home with Father and walk into the cottage)

Mother: Jill GO TO BED RIGHT NOW.

Jill: Um.. Ok.

Mother: I can’t believe that you did that Jill.

Jill: Well I Slipped!

Jack: Yeah she only slipped!

Mother: Jill you HAVE to go to bed now.

Jill: Ok ( As she puts on her pjs and hops into bed)

Father: Well I need Bananas to wake me up.

Mother: Um...Ok so do I.( As they disappear into the kitchen)


Published by Teneka T.

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